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Post by snowqueen on Dec 6, 2006 7:13:31 GMT -5
Dont we all just love the odd poem here and there! Well i thought id share one of mine.. its kinda morbid but i think it makes alot of sense .. hope you like it.. Reality
Call upon your restless state For whom you loved, you now should hate. In the dark I’d call your name Save your soul, relieve the pain. I'd take your hand and lead you home Forever devoted, your never alone.
I’d say black, you’d say white I’m always wrong, you’re always right. Your love was my fantasy My life the reality.
One step closer, two steps back The harder I try, the more I’d lose track. Your empty words corrupt my mind How was I so stupid, why was I so blind? I’d always be the one you’d blame Alone I’d stand, it was always the same.
I’d say black, you’d say white I’m always wrong, you’re always right. Your love was my fantasy My life the reality.
In the dark you’ll hear no name Nor save your soul, your still in pain. Won’t take your hand or lead you home No longer devoted, you’re always alone.
You say black, I say white Now who’s wrong, now who’s right. Your love was my fantasy Your death the reality.
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Post by lod171717 on Dec 7, 2006 0:36:34 GMT -5
i dont like it
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Post by snowqueen on Dec 7, 2006 9:38:23 GMT -5
Really? Oh my how much that hurts.. *laughs* .. Doesnt bother me any, not everyone can like the same thing.. hense why everyone is individual.
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Post by Emma-ScreamoKID on Dec 7, 2006 11:07:12 GMT -5
i really like that is clever and made me think lol
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Post by snowqueen on Dec 7, 2006 12:12:33 GMT -5
thankyou emz .. im glad you liked it x x .. you should post some up x
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Post by eellaaa on Dec 7, 2006 18:17:19 GMT -5
It was a nice read.
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Post by lod171717 on Dec 8, 2006 4:56:04 GMT -5
actually ive decided its a good poem its just not the type of poetry i like i like happy poetry
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Post by x-Yeh.. on Dec 8, 2006 10:54:27 GMT -5
I love it. Makes you think. Very good poet.
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Post by snowqueen on Dec 8, 2006 11:38:35 GMT -5
Happy poetry? i can arrange some happy poetry for you x
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Post by Nicky on Dec 8, 2006 23:57:47 GMT -5
actually ive decided its a good poem its just not the type of poetry i like i like happy poetry Define happy poetry. snowqueen I love it! You should come up with a tune and make it into a song!
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Post by lod171717 on Dec 13, 2006 3:40:36 GMT -5
like the kinda poetry that me and steph and kat write like cute and funny poetry but its still an awesome poem
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Post by ~*~#!!_DeaDlY-De$iRes~*~*!! on Dec 23, 2006 18:56:22 GMT -5
wow it's a cool poem to me sound like song (the chorus 'you'd say black..') GJ
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Post by lod171717 on Jan 4, 2007 8:22:11 GMT -5
yeh that would make a great song...
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Post by * / / K a t y .. o x ] < * on Jan 11, 2007 7:34:13 GMT -5
yer... im same as Lod tho - happy poems all da way
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Post by xxemoliciousxx on Nov 25, 2007 9:22:57 GMT -5
WOW! That poem was ammaaziingggg xx
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