Post by irresistiblel0ve on Dec 19, 2006 0:13:18 GMT -5
ЅησωfιακέЅ
At night when the sun goes to bed,
I went out and found snowflakes on my head,
The shivering feeling crept up my spine,
I felt a cold breath blow on me from behind,
I looked up and almost cried,
the tears on my face did not dare to hide,
Remebering the past sad moments in my life,
I tried not to hide my new found strife,
I found it weird why Id be sad,
The snowflakes on my head had ...
been a happy thing to think about,
I rubbed snow on face and in its place,
without a doubt the tears were gone,
gone from the taps where they had sprung,
In the house I crept,
My alarm clock I had set,
Placed myself in the bed,
And began to smile about the snowflakes,
That I had found on my head...
Im open to any new critiques. so cmb.
At night when the sun goes to bed,
I went out and found snowflakes on my head,
The shivering feeling crept up my spine,
I felt a cold breath blow on me from behind,
I looked up and almost cried,
the tears on my face did not dare to hide,
Remebering the past sad moments in my life,
I tried not to hide my new found strife,
I found it weird why Id be sad,
The snowflakes on my head had ...
been a happy thing to think about,
I rubbed snow on face and in its place,
without a doubt the tears were gone,
gone from the taps where they had sprung,
In the house I crept,
My alarm clock I had set,
Placed myself in the bed,
And began to smile about the snowflakes,
That I had found on my head...
Im open to any new critiques. so cmb.
