Leah.
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Post by Leah. on Dec 22, 2006 17:57:25 GMT -5
dead; by me. she walked to the apex and looked around at the powdered trees and Chrysanthemum. this winter was bitter. callousness consumes her. it was everything it was nothing. she became coy she dissasociated somewhat discarnate she dissipated. eradicated like a rose from the ground. your exsanguination choked her. she was never found. under the ice she rose like the undead enmity on her face. a thread sewed her mouth shut she was banned to this world full of addiction. her requiem, you will be attending. but her soul will be neverending. your words ate her alive. she seethes beneath your eyes. the x's on her hands the rope around her neck she fell into the darkness suicidal filligree is all she is now.
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Post by lod171717 on Dec 23, 2006 5:16:58 GMT -5
i like it! its kinda deep... but its a good poem!!
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Leah.
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Post by Leah. on Dec 23, 2006 13:30:04 GMT -5
ty. <3
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Post by ~*~#!!_DeaDlY-De$iRes~*~*!! on Dec 23, 2006 18:53:34 GMT -5
i dnt get it
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Post by x-Yeh.. on Dec 26, 2006 7:09:19 GMT -5
Its very good/
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Leah.
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Post by Leah. on Dec 26, 2006 17:54:28 GMT -5
maybe if you knew how to use vowels, you would. you're dismissed.
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Post by ~*~#!!_DeaDlY-De$iRes~*~*!! on Dec 26, 2006 20:39:56 GMT -5
maybe if you knew how to use vowels, you would. you're dismissed. i seriously don't get you what's this thing about not knowing how to use vowels? soz, i know vowels
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Post by * / / K a t y .. o x ] < * on Dec 27, 2006 1:07:47 GMT -5
a e i o u lol they r the vowels i know:P nyway that poem rokkered ;D xx
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Post by ~*~#!!_DeaDlY-De$iRes~*~*!! on Dec 28, 2006 20:38:24 GMT -5
a e i o u lol they r the vowels i know:P nyway that poem rokkered ;D xx there the ones i know too, don't know what she's going on though
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Post by rock_queen on Apr 12, 2007 14:16:48 GMT -5
loved it!!...
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