My poem. please read

[melissa]

Dancing Girl
She swiftly dances across the room.
Straight and proper, she softly lands on
her pink ballet slippers.
A black chiffon skirt wraps around my
sister's petite waist and twirls with her.

Her sunflower hair, secured by a scarlet
elastic band, sways with each
graceful movement.
Under her big turquoise eyes,
freckles lightly sprinkle her nose.

This young girl's carefree smile reflects
her joy and lightheartedness.
Mariah will always dance like an angel.

By: Melissa S.

[melissa]

what do you guys think??

[lod171717]

i like it! its awesome.

[melissa]

thanks

[loverofzacefron]

it's totally brilliant !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :-)

[xxemoliciousxx]

Wow u really have a talent for poetry.....